[Morningstar Rising]: 113.One As Weak As I | Rating: 0.65 |
2007-02-27 Jenna Rose: This is beautiful. Sad in a way, but beautiful.
2007-02-27 Morningstar Rising: Thank you, it comes from a dark place that lives inside of me, I guess we all have that darkness buried deep.
2007-03-02 iippo: Very emotional and beautiful and Willow Rose said.
One little error has slipped in there, on line 10: 'casted' isn't a word, the past tense of 'cast' is 'cast' o.O
Also, is the lack of punctuation on purpose? It feels breath-taking and a little rushed without punctuation...
2007-03-03 Morningstar Rising: Thank you, and thanks for pointing that out, I am not good when it comes to punctuation, not sure how to punctuate it. Any and all help is welcomed.